Sleeping Valor

Heh. lol. I've seen your story around a zillion times, not sure if I ever commented though. I've downloaded it though and I'll probably get my edits to you one ...

Ok, I have no patience for grammar right now, so I'll just critique plot-ness. Okies? He sat in an oval shaped room. First sentence. I don't know about the rest ...

Okay, I've been writing this story and some people asked me to keep them updated. Now, the first time I sent a PM to them all (put the usernames in, ...

It becomes a problem when you reach chapter two and have no names for the characters in it. I'd added brief descriptions of the name needing characters as well as ...

Welcome! ^_^ I can't say I hate any Naruto characters at the moment, so I won't vote. But I do love Manga. I read pretty much anything I can get ...

9/10 If I could stop myself from writing, I'm sure I'd realize that's about me. =P

The question is not: what do we think of her switching sides? The question is: what does she think of switching sides? Thinking about it from the character's perspective, this ...

N - Novel! Both the adjective and the noun.

The wanting to write randomly, I get all the time. I think I shall call it 'writer's itch'. Here's some things I do to get ideas! 1) Look at random ...

I can help! :D Or at least I think I can. I've been helping someone else improve their writing and they seem to have appreciated it so maybe I can ...

Welcome Matt! o_O Has everyone been writing since they were a kid?? *only started after she read Harry Potter* Generic plots are rather annoying, I agree. Though I still love ...

lol. Cute. I liked it. I have a while file of little (very unsuccessful) dialogs that at the time were meant to be funny. =P Nice.

lol. I loved these books! I'd be rooting for Jacob, if it wasn't for the fact Edward is a vampire and therefore trumps all Jacob's sweetness. I think I didn't ...

King Iongo kneeled [knelt, methinks] down to the grubby stone floor and desperately begged[s] for[/s] Teslarhi to spare his life. Teslarhi was much taller and more muscular th a n ...

I'd personally recommend cupcakes, but that's just me. If you're making cookies, my sister makes these awesome Snickerdoodles. This isn't the recipe she uses, but here's one I found on ...